Yes, I realize that that isn’t strictly speaking “proper grammar”
but its how I speak, and that’s how I want my blog to sound. Like you are
talking to me. Anyway, let’s get on to it. First of all, I would just like to
add a little disclaimer; I don’t actually know what I’m doing. I mean, the
general idea is there, but firms grasp on it, well, I just don’t have that. So here
goes.
Albee’s American Dream warns
that the current generation of upper class has gutted the heart and soul of
what it means to be American, and replaced our collective dream with a shallow materialism,
longing to acquire power and wealth, but there is hope for change.
In the American Dream, Albee writes
the young man as the American dream; we can tell that he is saying something
about the new dream replacing the old dream, which in this case is grandma,
right away. From the start, we can see that the new American dream is shallow,
and cannot feel anything. The only thing that the dream wants is money, a
symbol of material goods.
We know that the dream is empty
when the young man mentions how he was before his twin was killed. He felt
love, and could care for others, but now that his sibling is gone, he has no
hope for recovering what he has lost. On the surface level, this seems like an extreme
twist, and something that doesn’t happen, well, ever. But once you dig deeper
and realize that mommy and daddy killed the brother, it becomes clear. By
having Mommy and Daddy kill the ‘bumble’, Albee is showing them shaping the
dream, cutting out the eyes so that the young man cannot see love, cutting off
its penis so that the young man cannot physically love someone, the list
continues.
We know that Grandma is the American
dream from other writers, It is collectively agreed apon by scholars, and can
be easily determined by the text. If you think about Grandma and the young man,
and the relationship between the two, there isn’t a relationship in the rest of
the play similar to it. For example, in the end, when everyone thinks that
grandma has left, the young man can see her on stage, and tries to bring a
glass for her, but she has to tell him that she is hiding. Other examples are
more subtle, and harder to pick out.
The hardest part of the text is who
is shaping the dream. In the story, we know that its mommy and daddy, but who
are mommy and daddy supposed to represent? There have been many debates as to
who mommy and daddy truly represent, many believed that they could be America as
a whole, or just middle and upper class, but after reading the text up close,
we know that they are purely upper class. The signs are quite easy to pick out,
but at first can be a bit hard to notice. In the begging of the play, mommy
comments on grandma reading her reading club books, at first, we think that
this is alright, but then we look at the time period that the play was set in.
Reading club meant something totally different. Reading club books were only
purchased by the wealthy, because they were expensive, and once they were paid
for, it was uncommon to touch them.
This leaves out the lower class
because they were not able to pay for expensive luxuries like books that were
never going to be read. The middle class was also ruled out due to time period.
The family lives in an apartment in a city, this may sound like they are
strapped for money, but in the nineteen sixties, having an apartment in the
city was a sign of major wealth. Only the richest could afford apartments like
that.
Albee can be considered many different
things, but a negative man he is not. Albee leaves grandma on the stage for a
reason. We grow to love the old woman, and are sad to see her go, even more so
when we realized that we are left with the young man, strangely devoid of any
emotion or love. But when grandma comes back, we feel better and are happy to
see her. Albee is trying to show us something here. Because our society is
going through a change of dream, it’s easy to get caught up on shiny new
things, but the values that we keep close to us are more important. Just
because we may not like the appearance of the old dream that does not mean that
the values are important.
In The American Dream, Edward Albee
tries to convey something to us, a warning. A warning that our trust in the
upper class will ruin us and our values will slowly be corrupted. Albee warns
against consumerism, telling us to stick to older values, ones that are not
rooted in shallow desire or selfish needs.
Rachel,
ReplyDeleteWell, its a start...Honestly, there's nothing terribly horrendous about this post. Honest. It's just that your claims need to be developed more...with important quotes. I don't want to list the items you forgot to mention but they are in the AP Lit Files if you get tired of my listing. But in short, there needs to be a brief summary of the play. A brief consideration of point of view, imagery, setting, and characters...and more. This post felt more like an analysis of your characters, though. Nothing wrong with that, just needs to be chopped waaayy in half.
Okay, how exactly do you know Grandma is the American Dream? Try looking back through the play for those details. Especially when Grandma is referred to as "rural" or when she tells the Young Man that if she were a 150 years younger she would date him(not sure about that #...I'm working from memory right now). Don't forget to also consider that Grandma's ability to talk to the audience in the end is her way of leaving the dream to us. What's the world's dream, Rachel?
And I don't think you need to start off with "I don't know what I am doing" If you're going to fail, fail comfortably and with pride. But, it's your prerogative. Be you Rachel!
Rachel,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ludia, you should use some quotes from Albee’s play in order to strengthen your claims. Also that you shouldn’t act so timid and weak with your writing, like you say that viewers know Grandma is the old American dream thanks to the commentary of other writers. Sure, it’s good to mention how these commentaries enriched your understanding of Grandma as a character, but you want to include your own thoughts and deductions as well.
This blog post may not serve as the most helpful study guide later in the year as it mainly seems like it’s just your response to Albee’s The American Dream. You may want to take a look at some of the other blogs so you can see how everyone else is structuring their post on this summary and analysis. Using subheadings could help separate information so it is easier to find, and there needs to be sections talking about the author himself, the setting, the characters, a few memorable and important quotes, Albee’s narrative voice, and a summary of the play; not just a thesis.
Rachel,
ReplyDeleteYou are honest, which I completely respect. I was worried when I wrote my plot & summary analysis that I was writing a pile of crap that people would immediately think: "What the hell...is this? Is she for real?" But since we all paddle this same boat, don't worry about that girl:) The main point of this assignment is to write the plot summary and highlight elements like "theme," "tone," "symbolism," and ecetetera which is all listed on Holmes' blog so that come test time it'll be easy to study what we've ran through in class. I do agree with Blake that some quotes will help your plot and summary analysis feel more evidenced. But this is not a bad start, it's all just a learning process and like I said, we're all paddling the same boat.